As you know, we do not interfere with the desires of the divine human or their choices, so we can only add and not take away. We like this thoroughness and the construction here of many essential elements for safety and the risk factors that may limit safety and well-being. The only comment we would add would be to consider inclusion of toxins and the effects and energies of outside organisms that may be capable of invading, as well as the consequences of any. This prayer, in effect, has our blessing for its use and for sharing with others as a fine example of recognizing the power of specificity to not leave things to chance, to vagaries of interpretation, and the risk of incomplete coverage, which may well happen routinely with such prayer requests because people are unaware of the hazards and it is difficult for the divine realm to protect them from something they do not understand or recognize and do not ask for help with.
That would be leading, that would be jumping out in front, and selectively sparing them without their understanding or awareness. This we cannot do and remain true to the spirit of the enterprise here, for human to learn to navigate, learn about their world, and then act accordingly in partnership with the divine realm, to request help for those perceived and dangerous hazards. This prayer will work quite well and will work as intended, given the required belief quotient of the person making the prayer request and the required level of inner strength and conviction to believe they are worthy of divine assistance and support. Those two requirements are always critical and limiting in terms of the ability of divine realm to respond as desired and expressed in the prayer request.
Many, many, people pray for things they are not a match to receive because of such limitations in belief and self-acceptance. This is sad and often tragic as well, but is part of human learning and must be allowed. Humans must help one another to recognize the pitfalls and teach better ways to work with the divine to get meaningful help. This prayer fulfills the need for clarity and specificity, and is done in a proper fashion to state things definitively, and directly, without mixing in humility and self-limiting language and assumptions that contaminate so many traditional prayers and thereby limit them in effectiveness.
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