Would this prayer be improved by including a request for it to be enacted each and every day?

Indeed, this prayer can be enhanced by adding language to leverage it through repetition to put it on automatic pilot, so to speak, and that will further add to its effectiveness. After all, keep in mind humans are in charge and we must follow your lead, so it is useful and very helpful to your aims to be specific and thorough in what you request to happen. We can always do more when it matches the human desire and request but can only add a little extra as we cannot lead to make things happen you have not thought of.